My Little Yuri Manga "Girl's Club"Updated 1/22/10

My Little Yuri Manga "Girl's Club"Updated 1/22/10

Here's a link to all the finished chapters uploaded to MedieFire along with my personal collection of yuri!
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I don't come across many loli yuri mangas, so I decided to make my own. Here is four chapters of my Loli yuri, the first chapter is the only one that has been finalized (but may redo it with my tablet). Along with the rough draft of the second and third chapter, with the fourth chapter in progress.
I've gone through a lot of other hentai ideas that I threw away in the end. I started Girl's Club on lined paper, so just incase I decided to scrap this idea as well, I wouldn't waste any more of my good paper. Feather-chan Annoyed 2

Last edited by Yimi on Fri Oct 12, 2007 5:26 pm; edited 2 times in total

Here's the rest.

That's pretty hot. I can't wait to see the worked out version.

I agree with you, it's incredibly hot, and it would be excellent in color Very Happy

Looks like a good start. I might suggest that you either vary the hair color or find a less similar hairstyle for one --- it's a little hard for me to distinguish between the two of them.

But on the whole it looks good.

	feather wrote:
	Looks like a good start. I might suggest that you either vary the hair color or find a less similar hairstyle for one --- it's a little hard for me to distinguish between the two of them. But on the whole it looks good.

Thanks! I do try to keep in mind how identical my characters look. It's hard keeping them looking different in the face, since the formula for a face in this style is so limited. My intention was to make one of them with darker hair. As for the hair styles, what can I say? I have a weakness for ponytails. Feather Kawaii 3

	akuma2002 wrote:
	I agree with you, it's incredibly hot, and it would be excellent in color

agree its sweet nice and hot but whit some color it would be EXCELENT!!!

Absofrickinlutely great Feather Kawaii 2

I can't wait to see your cleaned and colored version Feather Kawaii 2

ja ne
l8r Kay?

Here is six more pages, finishing up this chapter of the manga. I'm working on the cleaned up version of this rough draft, while continuing on with the story. I'm eventually attaching a colored beginning to this chapter as well.

OMG...

you're soooooo goooooood....

*applause*

KEEP UP THE GOOD, NO, UBER EXCELLENTEH WORK! XD

nice... do you plan to correct the lines, or just leave it like this?
I mean a cleanup...

	Yimi wrote:
	Here is six more pages, finishing up this chapter of the manga. I'm working on the cleaned up version of this rough draft, while continuing on with the story. I'm eventually attaching a colored beginning to this chapter as well.

Doesn't that answer you, Fragnostic?

Sorry, I was rather interested in the manga than the posts -_-'

(If you end, maybe some color Wink

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	Fragnostic wrote:
	Sorry, I was rather interested in the manga than the posts -_-' (If you end, maybe some color )

Heh, I'm not sure if I'd take the time to color every page, but what I've noticed in real manga is they do around four pages in color for the beginning, then continue in black and white. It's probably a money thing with real manga, or tradition to do it like that. So I plan to possibly do colored openings to each chapter, or only before the first chapter. This way I can have some color while making more progress on the story. Coloring takes awhile Sad

. I plan on having at least two more chapters, each chapter introducing another character. Smile

Ill say one thing: Great. I like your work.