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I started to read your chapter five several times, arrancar, but - being interrupted after a few pages all the time - I decided to make the link list below first. I hope you don't mind ...Section 1 (pages 1-17): Information from the woman who captured MisakiSection 2 (pages 18-41): A beautiful girl in the land of eternal snowSection 3 (pages 42-65): Mio and Yuki have a good time in the bathhouse Section 4 (pages 66-84): Yuki’s memoriesSection 5 (pages 85-89): Mio and Yuki start searching Nobuko
* Please consider next time to start a new chapter in a new post without comments about previous chapters
note: perhaps it's not generally known, but an orange text represents in principle a (hyper)link. Clicking e.g. the 1st row in the orange list above (disregarding the spoiler), your browser will show you the post with pages 0-9. Clicking the 2nd orange row will give you the post with pages 10-19 ...
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arrancar85
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jacxxx: I started to read your chapter five several times, arrancar, but - being interrupted after a few pages all the time - I decided to make the link list below first. I hope you don't mind ...
I don't mind. I like your descriptions.
jacxxx: * Please consider next time to start a new chapter in a new post without comments about previous chapters .
Sure, no problem. I'll do that next time, thanks for the help.
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arrancar85
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Mio's story continues with the start of chapter six.
As Mio and Yuki watch the sunset together, a mystic of green hair confronts them...
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 5:50 am |
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jacxxx
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In smaller pieces it's much easier to follow your interesting story, ar, thanks!
btw: I really love your Yuki character. At the end of the story, could you introduce me as Her Prince on the White Horse
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Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:07 am |
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jacxxx: In smaller pieces it's much easier to follow your interesting story, ar, thanks!
No problem.
jacxxx: btw: I really love your Yuki character. At the end of the story, could you introduce me as Her Prince on the White Horse
Okay, sure.
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Mio learns the truth of her mother's disappearance...
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After learning the truth, Megumi offers Mio the kind of pleasure that only a mother can give...
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Beautifully done, just beautiful. You are so talented, your use of perspective is wonderful.....that in addition to drawing beautiful cocks
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This is a super fantastic story I love all the mystics They seem to be a loving and caring race Eagerly awaiting the next segment
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Megumi helps Mio clean up. Later that day, Mio keeps her promise to Yuki, and they watch the night sky together...
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Thanks, CosmicDragon. Glad to hear your looking forward to seeing more.
bobbie2b: Beautifully done, just beautiful. You are so talented, your use of perspective is wonderful.....
Cool, thanks. I think I am getting better.
Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate it.
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Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:04 am |
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Yuki reveals her feelings to Mio. With mother and daughter reunited, they prepare for their travel back home.
This marks the end of chapter six. To be continued...
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 5:24 am |
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Index of Mystics Chapter Six: Warm to the Touch |
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arrancar85: Yuki reveals her feelings ... marks the end of chapter six. To be continued... I'm really glad the Mystic saga is going to be continued, Arrancar
I had hoped to see more of our gorgeous little Yuki - her quest for her previous Mystic lover Nobuko, her village ruled by the ice-cold and very demanding Princess, ...
It seems we have to wait for that a while and use our own fantasy ....
Meanwhile I'm looking forward to the reunion of Megumi and her children. In a natural way they will have lot of hot sex together, I wished that in our real world we had relations as warm to the touch as in the Mystic's world
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The next day, while Mio and Megumi return home, other events are taking place.
Chapter seven begins. A runaway fugitive hides inside a crystal cave and makes an interesting discovery...
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arrancar85
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jacxxx: I'm really glad the Mystic saga is going to be continued, Arrancar
Me too. It's good that I was able to keep it going. These chapters were made last year, and there is so much more. I just finished the latest chapter a month ago.
I can see you really like Yuki. She must be your favorite. I'm trying to make some profiles of the characters. Don't know when I'll get those done.
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